I did think the prose was a tad purple, but it was more than tolerable. :) Hurrah! Decent ficcers are finding their way to the fandom!

Here's hoping that more will come. :) That fic gave me hope.

And yay! I'd love to see some first-person WAFF from you. ::g::

I just had a completely out-of-nowhere, wild idea. I could rewrite the whole Adrenalin in Drake first person POV. I think that would actually improve it. :D

Okay, but if you cry and want to kill me afterwards, I disclaim all responsibility here and now.

Neeks, WRITING THIS IS CAUSING ME PAIN.

O.o!

...

*quietly* Okay, I'm a little scared now. I still wanna read it, I wanna wanna wanna, but I think I'll go find my blankie first.