Well, cool, but can I see the first version first? XD
Um. Yes. ...If you agree to beta it for me! (See how cleverly I handled that? Huh, huh? XD)
It's a vignette, so I'm trying to force it out tonight - and I'm afraid it might be getting a little OOC because my inner poet is trying to take over the narrative even though it's JJ first person POV. Just a warning.
OOC in a too-angsty-for-JJ kind of way? I can understand that. Imagine what I'm going through with Common Ground. I had JJ shoot Drake. O_x JJ angst is difficult to deal with, so no worries, I won't berate you on that account.
Anyway, yes, blankies are recommended, as well as hot cocoa and soft fluffy things to hug.
Hmm. *grabs Drake and snuggles* This'll do nicely. Drake *is*, after all, the teddyest man to walk this earth. Aw, JJ, don't glare at me like that - there's room for you, too.
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Um. Yes. ...If you agree to beta it for me! (See how cleverly I handled that? Huh, huh? XD)
It's a vignette, so I'm trying to force it out tonight - and I'm afraid it might be getting a little OOC because my inner poet is trying to take over the narrative even though it's JJ first person POV. Just a warning.
OOC in a too-angsty-for-JJ kind of way? I can understand that. Imagine what I'm going through with Common Ground. I had JJ shoot Drake. O_x JJ angst is difficult to deal with, so no worries, I won't berate you on that account.
Anyway, yes, blankies are recommended, as well as hot cocoa and soft fluffy things to hug.
Hmm. *grabs Drake and snuggles* This'll do nicely. Drake *is*, after all, the teddyest man to walk this earth. Aw, JJ, don't glare at me like that - there's room for you, too.