ext_286050 ([identity profile] megami-no-yume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fuyu 2006-07-28 05:27 am (UTC)

You touched on so many interesting things in these short drabbles that some whole fics don't have. Symbolism, while showing their seperate feelings... and a lot don't look at the probably guilt and awkwardness of realizing you have feelings for more than one of your friends... what with all that pre-established SoKai stuff in the main story... but I still believe there were already 'feelings' on Riku's part mixed into that. (I felt that his feelings were toward Kairi at the time, but it can be interpretted so many ways.)

We're not taught that it's 'okay' to be in love with two people, afterall. It'd be really nice to see these aspects incorporated into their getting passed all this. <3 Really great writing! OT3 is the best. <3

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